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Is it correct to say

Mon expérience professionnel me permet de bien comprendre des processus métiers et des besoins fonctionnels du monde d'entreprise

Any way I can improve the sentence ?

Thank you.

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To start with the boring stuff: you would say "professionnelle" to match the gender of "expérience".

Then I would probably replace "des" with "les" both times, to appear more decisive and precise.

Finally, I would replace "du monde d'entreprise" with "du monde de l'entreprise" (or simply "du monde professionnel"). Which gives us:

Mon expérience professionnelle me permet de bien comprendre les processus métiers et les besoins fonctionnels du monde de l'entreprise

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