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Sep 5, 2018 at 15:00 comment added Papa Poule @user168676 Thanks, both for the supportive words and the good suggestions. I’ve taken it all to heart and have edited accordingly.
Sep 5, 2018 at 15:00 history edited Papa Poule CC BY-SA 4.0
to try to address user168676's comments and to incorporate one of his/her suggestions into my answer
Sep 5, 2018 at 6:37 comment added LPH On the contrary of what you purport, I believe your option well worth the consideration of a translator.
Sep 5, 2018 at 6:32 comment added LPH I fail to see the feebleness and what is unidiomatic as well the play on words, it's puzzling; except for the repetition of words (faire part/faire partir) that one might prefer to avoid but that is acceptable enough, I see nothing blatantly inharmonious; I wonder however if the touch of slight jocularity confered by not mentionning the particular nature of the faire-part would not be enhanced through a variant such as those: "Vous n'auriez pas un faire-part spécial à envoyer bientôt, par hasard?" ou "Vous n'auriez pas un certain faire-part à envoyer bientôt, par hasard?".
Sep 4, 2018 at 23:23 history answered Papa Poule CC BY-SA 4.0